Tuesday 20 January 2015

Feedback from 1st Draft



This is my friend Geeta, also a media student who gave me great advice on what I did well and what I could improve on.
Geeta Feedback from Sophie Boston on Vimeo.



 
I also got feedback from my peers at the BFI Film Academy, as who better to give advice than people who work a lot behind cameras and complete similar projects? They were all lovely comments, and Lareb in particular gave me excellent criticism. The response to my question about whether to keep the two boys in or not varied, so I am going to shoot my last scene with Adam and Beth and replace Marcus and William just to compare the two - I am undecided yet.
 

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